I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
This week we have been doing pobble and we had to write a story about an invetion it could be sea it could be land or it could be sky i piked sea so i did a time machine.
Great job Hollie- I love your colourful picture. Where would you choose to go in your time machine and when? I would find it hard to choose! Maybe ancient Greece or Egypt for me!
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Great job Hollie- I love your colourful picture. Where would you choose to go in your time machine and when? I would find it hard to choose! Maybe ancient Greece or Egypt for me!
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ReplyDeletei like your underwater machine its really cute an great
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