My block buster story

So this is my block buster adventure story right now . I haven't finished it yet but I only have the end to go. Its kinda hard to read but you can just click on the pictures and its easier to read

 What do you think will happen next?  

The first man on the moon

For the last couple of weeks our theme in our big class room was space so in my literacy class we had to write a story about Neil Armstrong landing on the moon. I decided to write my story on about how he got there and how he felt. I had loads of fun writing this story and I Evan learnt some new things about the moon and Neil Armstrong.