For the last couple of weeks our theme in our big class room was space so in my literacy class we had to write a story about Neil Armstrong landing on the moon. I decided to write my story on about how he got there and how he felt. I had loads of fun writing this story and I Evan learnt some new things about the moon and Neil Armstrong.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 8 August 2019
The first man on the moon
For the last couple of weeks our theme in our big class room was space so in my literacy class we had to write a story about Neil Armstrong landing on the moon. I decided to write my story on about how he got there and how he felt. I had loads of fun writing this story and I Evan learnt some new things about the moon and Neil Armstrong.
Labels:
Facts about the moon,
literacy,
moon,
Neil Armstrong,
space,
story,
writing
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