I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I have been learning about vocabulry in writeing. we looked at a picture and thought critically about it.I fort that it was a little hard because at the start i did not no what i could write but i did it I am amazed that I finished it.
Great job Hollie. I loved your story about the tiny door in the secret house. Maybe the fairies use the secret door as well. You have a tiny door in your room just for them too!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Great job Hollie. I loved your story about the tiny door in the secret house. Maybe the fairies use the secret door as well. You have a tiny door in your room just for them too!
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