Spider
A snecky croller
A fast hunter
A creepy crawler
A insect hunter
A fast jumper
A creepy jumper
A web maker
A insected eater
Dolphin
A cute swisher
A nice helper
A amazing diver
A amazing swimmer
A rare swimmer
A smart diver
A intelligent diver
Unicorn
A magical creacher
A rainbow creacher
A candy eater
A rainbow pooper
A all-day creacher
A cute creature
A joy giver
A magical trotter
In writing with Mrs M'g we learnt about kenning poems.
They are an old Nordic style peom .They have 8 lines and always has a non
and word ending in "er" to make it a little more easy I tryed to do animals
that I new somethings about.I thort it was kinda hard because you write stuff
down but then all your ideas are gone I you have to finds some more things
about the animals.
They are an old Nordic style peom .They have 8 lines and always has a non
and word ending in "er" to make it a little more easy I tryed to do animals
that I new somethings about.I thort it was kinda hard because you write stuff
down but then all your ideas are gone I you have to finds some more things
about the animals.
I like your kenning poems I really like your poem about Unicorns maybe next time you could make the writing not off the page. Possibly also not use creature a lot but I like it.I wonder why it is off the page?
ReplyDeleteThanks Ayla for telling me that my writing was of the side I did not relies that
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