So today and yesterday we had a task to do some DLO'S about Langue week. So what I picked was watching and hearing some video songs and Writing a story about what you heard so this is mine (I did 2 story's but the same Setting because the first One I did was a bit long so I made a shorter one if you cant be bothered to read the first one)
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1. The long writing
Vai was sitting down peacefully at the beach watching the horizon
Then Heard A massive
grumble from her stomach Begging for food So she decided to get
up and get
Some coconut from the
golden coconut tree when all of a sudden she slipped and fell through
the ground
zooming down a wooden
slide going down into the ground to a massive cave, Then slammed
into the ground
“OW” Vai Hesitated
“Where am I?” she said to herself “How do i get out? There must have
been someone
here before me
since there was a slide”. Vai decided to walk around the cave to try to
find an exit.
Then all of a sudden she heard a noise from behind a massive rock.
Vai quietly hid
behind a rock to try and
see what it was. Just after the creature crawls out of behind the rock.
“WOAH “
Vai says in her head.
Right in front of her was A MASSIVE shiny Tiger with gold all over it,
but what Caught
Vai's eye was the
Necklace, The forgotten necklace that everyone was looking for but
before Vai could do
anything the tiger
started Walking towards Vai and started to stared right into her eyes.
“Why are you here?
” the creature
says. Vai takes a step back “HOW CAN YOU TALK” vai said with a
scared shaky voice,
“the creature
glances back at her “well I feel into this cave and I don't know how to
get out” vai says back.
“Well I can help you get out if you want” Says the Creature,
Vai Hesitated for a second
but thought that
the creature was the only help i'm going to get. “Ok thanks that
would be great. “I think
I know an Exit about 3 hours
into the cave” the creature says ”HOW BIG IS THIS CAVE” Vai says back but the
creature had already started
walking.
Vai catches up to the creature “Well you walk fast” Vai says
But the creature doesn't
respond “well do you have a name” vai says “tamatoa” the
creature says. Vai and Tanatoa
start having a chat But before they knew it they were at an exit.
“Well thank you for showing
me an exist out here” Vai says”No problem” Tamatoa says Back.
Then Tamatoa takes
off the Special Necklace And gives it To Vai. “Here have it” Tamatoa says
“ Thank you” Vai says back . Then started climbing out of the cave.
From That day Vai Had become the Captain Of the
land for finding the lost necklace, but Vai never forgot tamatoa.
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2. The sort one
Vai had just came back from a nice walk at the beach but all of a sudden Vai
fell through the ground
into a
massive cave. Vai Hesitated but decided to get up and try to find an exit
out of there
. But all of a
sudden
she heard a Noise from Behind a rock So she decided to hide.
Then just after the creature
crawled from
out behind of the rock it looked like a MASSIVE Tiger but it had
gold all over him. But what
caught Vai’s
Eye was The green necklace that was Around his neck.
“Is that The lost necklace?” Vai says
to herself
but before Vai could think anything else the tiger Walked up to Vai.
“what are you doing here?”
the creature
says in a dark voice.
“Uhm Well I was walking back from the beach then
I fell into a hole into this cave
and Im looking for
an exit” Vai says back. “Well I guess im not doing
anything I can help u find an exit
I think theres one close”
The creature says.
“Oh that would be great” Vai says back.
So the Creature and Vai Started walking to the Exit while
talking about them and there
life but before they
knew they where
already at the exit “well thank you for Helping me”
Vai says :no problem i havent talked to a human in ages
I kinda miss it” the creature
says Then Took of his
necklace of his neck and gave it To Vai “for you” the creature
says. “Thank you” Vai says then Started
climbing up the exit.
From that day on Vai Became the leader of the Island for finding
the Lost necklace. But Vai
never forgot the
creature that helped
her have a good life.
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what one do you like better
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