I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For the start of the year we are doing all about me drawings.We had to draw what we look think and write at lest 5 facts about yourself thought it was very fun but the thing that I thought was challenging was making the hair but the rest was fun.
Hello Hollie. I loved your background. For your all about you. maybe next time you should make your background a different color because your using the same colours. Well I loved your drawing it is so good Hollie It made me think of my all about me. How may people do you have in your family ? it hit me because you had a cat in your family. so I wondered
Hi Hollie I really like your Nike shirt you made all by yourself. Maybe next time you could make you own glasses instead of using glasses off google.All the colors remind me of the Pretty rainbow. How much fun did you have making this wonderful masterpiece.Please go check out my blog Bye.
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Hello Hollie.
ReplyDeleteI loved your background. For your all about you. maybe next time you should make your background a different color because your using the same colours. Well I loved your drawing it is so good Hollie It made me think of my all about me. How may people do you have in your family ? it hit me because you had a cat in your family. so I wondered
Keep up the good work Hollie.
Hi Hollie I really like your Nike shirt you made all by yourself. Maybe next time you could make you own glasses instead of using glasses off google.All the colors remind me of the Pretty rainbow. How much fun did you have making this wonderful masterpiece.Please go check out my blog Bye.
ReplyDeleteThanks Harmony for the Feedback next time I will try to make my own glasses. And I will definitely go cheek out your blog.
Deletei like the person that you made
ReplyDeleteAwesome Hollie- it does look like you and the glasses are just like yours!
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